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Here is episode 1 of my new series: The Eternal Death. Please Comment after you have read the first version.
Original Version[]
Doctor Who: The Eternal Death Episode 1: Evil Rises By Eamon
A man of about 20 is sitting on a chair, typing on a computer, wearing a light grey hoodie. A Knock at the door is heard *
Man: It’s Open.
The door opens and a large shadow appears over the man. The man looks over and smirks.*
Man: I trust everyone is in place?
The head of the shadow moves up and down as if to nod.*
Man: Excellent.
The man pulls back his hood, but the scene switches to the shadow before we can see what is underneath. It is revealed that the shadow belongs to no one. After the room is filled with an eerie blue light, it is revealed that on the computer is a list of plans:
The daleks, cybermen, rogue time lords and humans (T Group) will all prepare a time machine to gather all the doctors together.
The silurians, sea devils, autons, and time axis (H group) will hypnotise the companions so that they all allow themselves to have their necks snapped by the weeping angels (HII Group).
The Raxicorocafallopatorians, vashta nerada and zygons (T.II Group) will teleport the daleks, cybermen, time lords and humans to safety while everyone else explode all the doctors to oblivion.
Then we will clone the dead and kill them again. Again. And again. And never stop. The rebirth of the dead, and the death of the Reborn. Forever. Dying every moment but living every moment. The Eternal Life. And The Eternal Death.
In the Background the voice of a cackling slitheen is heard and the scene switches back to the computer, where it is shown that the T Group are contacting him.*
Opening Credits
The Scene switches to a dalek ship. Inside there are billions of drones, a strategist, a scientist, two eternals, the supreme, and thousands of humans and humanoid figures.*
The Master (Harold Saxon, Blonde Version): Can I change these plans a bit- What was it?
Slitheen: Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen.
Master: Well, Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen, could I eat some of the companions? I’m Still Hungry.
Hix: I Guess so. Just leave the hair, and we’ll clone them from that.
Master: Dood Blan Krix Chon Koak Heel Blam Kong Quoo Slitheen-
Hix: You Mean ‘Good Plan Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen’
Master: No, I mean Dood Blan Kix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen.
Hix: Who?
Master: Your Uncle.
Hix: My dad was an only child.
Master: Okay, he’s your great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great uncle, but it’s simpler to call him your uncle. Fair Enough?
Hix: Fair Enough. But he’s dead. He couldn’t survive- How many years?
Master: 1,00,000,0000,00000,000000,0000000,00000000,00000000,0000000000,00000000000 years. And you’re right. But it’s not the original version. We have cloning technology, and he didn’t die of old age. He was assassinated by a time lord, using vinegar. But the slitheen were in charge back then. He was the first Prime Minister of Raxicoricafallopatorius, and his remains were kept in a sacred jar. We got permission to take a drop and cloned him.
Hix: Right. But why did you say that?
Master: He’s a computer expert. I was asking him to get into contact H and H.II. Dood?
The screen splits into four parts. The top left was the T group, the top right was the H group, the bottom left was T.II the bottom right was H.II. The scene switches to underground.*
Silurian: This is Stilac, Current leader of the Silurians. The H group is ready.
Master: And H.II?
Angel Bob: We escaped from the crack, sir. But the Doctor has part of the time vortex within him, sir. He can sense our presence, as can you, sir. He’ll soon find out, sir. We must prepare soon.
Stilac: We are prepared.
Hix: We are prepared.
Master: We are prepared.
Angel Bob: We are preparing to kill.
Master: What! But you only have to snap necks!
Angel Bob: Not them. NOW!
Nothing happens.*
Master: Yes, you all had plans to betray us, and I destroyed them by wiping your minds, replacing them with terrible plans, and making sure that you didn’t even use those plans.(Changes to a calm, soothing, mesmerising voice) Now, you will never try and betray us again. You will let me kill you all once you have served your purpose. In 10 seconds, only your sub-conscience will remember this. 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0.
Angel Bob: As I was saying, sir. We are prepared.
Master: Excellent.
Stilac: We have news of the doctors.
Master: Which ones?
Stilac: All of them.
Master: And what of them?
Stilac: See for yourself. Computer, open file D1/12.
The scene switches to the original version of the TARDIS where the first doctor, Susanne foreman, Ian Chesterson, and Barbara Wright are seen together. The doctor is looking at the screen. *
Doctor: According to this, were being tracked. By creatures from the time of the dinosaurs. But there in 2010 right now. Hang on, that’s me. The eleventh version of me, only enhanced into evil. He’s on a screen, and so are we. Wait, there’s another one, a sixth one. Wait, they know can see them what, wait....... Get out! Get out! NOW! Just walk out, or you’ll die! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No, no, no.......................................... RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s...... No, I’ll survive. I can see me. The companions walk out and the doctor follows. They walk out the TARDIS doors close and it disappears. The doctor turns around and sees another TARDIS. He walks in but his companions don’t follow. He sees the second doctor and the second doctor stares in surprise.*
Second Doctor: But... but...but... but what about the first law of time?
First Doctor: It’s an emergency.
Second Doctor: Who is it?
First Doctor: Everyone .Atraxi, Blowfish, Chelonians, Cybermen, Daleks, Draconians, Drahvins, Haegmoth, Hoix, Judoon, Nestene Concsiensous , Autons, Roboforms, Silurians, Slitheen Family, Sontarans, Sycorax, Terileptils, Uvodni, Weevils, Zygons.
Second Doctor: Right. We need more help. I’m setting course for the third doctor. And he’s setting course for the fourth. And he’s setting course for the fifth. And-
First Doctor: Alright, I get the idea. Just Go, and be back in one second. I’ll wait out there for you. The first doctor walks out. The TARDIS disappears and appears again one second later. The second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, tenth and eleventh doctors walk out. They are followed by a short, thin, blonde child. They all walk back into the TARDIS.*
Second doctor: Enough?
First Doctor: Yes.
Third Doctor: I disagree. We need companions. Now.
Fourth Doctor: I say Zoe, Jamie, Polly, Ben, The Brigadier, Liz, Jo, Mike, John, Sarah Jane, Harry, Leela, Nyssa, Adric, Tegan, and Romana.
Fifth Doctor: Sixth, Could you go pick them up?
Sixth Doctor: I guess, Celery Boy.
Seventh Doctor: You can Talk, Temper Head.
Eighth Doctor: Oh shut up, (Changes to a Scottish accent), Doctorrr.
Ninth Doctor: Be quiet, Human Lover.
Tenth& Eleventh Doctors: Hey, you lot, stop fighting, were facing everything we have before, and you’re fighting over your own personalities. (Stop talking and look at each other awkwardly) That was weird.
Ninth Doctor: I can’t believe I’m going to turn into that thi-
Boy: Just stop. I may look the youngest of us, but I’m a 915 year old time lord who destroyed his world, brought it back, fought in the real last great time war and lost and died, got resurrected by my previous self, only to see everything and everyone I knew destroyed and my lives taken, so now I’m on my last. If I die, were extinct. Because if I die, the time vortex will have no physical existence and time will tear open. You will all die with me, as will everything. So just go, and do what you need to do. I will come with you, but only to save existence from them. But I’ll tell you one thing: right now, I hold time inside myself. I hold existence. We save ourselves, we save time. We don’t survive, time doesn’t survive. The other rogue time lords can hold it, but they would allow it to be corrupted and destroyed and them with it. So right now, we are existence. If we can defeat them as individuals, we can defeat them working together. (Turns to the Eleventh doctor) Go get every companion. (Turns to the Tenth doctor) Every Ally. (Turns to ninth doctor.) Every Item we could possibly need. (Turns To Eighth doctor.) Every species on our side. (Turns to seventh doctor.) Every Army, Human or alien. (Turns to sixth, then back to seventh.) Actually, no, you go and try to “convince” some more species. (Turns to sixth) You go and get every army, human or alien. (Turns to forth, then to eleventh and tenth) Actually, I’ll replace you two with the third and first. I could use your brains. We’re going to stay and make a plan. Scene changes back to the underground Silurian base.*
Stilac: So now we know the current incarnation of the doctor.
Master: So everyone, get ready. We’re at war with the rest of the universe.
Angel Bob: OK.
Stilac: OK.
Hix: OK.
Master: Good. But let’s find out there plan first. Scene switches back to the inside of the TARDIS where the second, forth, tenth, eleventh and twelfth doctors are looking at the screen.*
Eleventh Doctor: Thing is, I’ve seen them working together before, and they trapped me in a box, but they were only working together because they thought I was going to destroy the universe. This time, they’re working together just to kill us. Maybe they want us out of the way, and then work together to-
Tenth Doctor: No, they wouldn’t work together unless it was absolutely necessary for survival. They have different aims. Daleks destroy, Cybermen upgrade, Atraxi destroy whatever they think is evil, sontaran fight, and Weevils feed, and so on. They wouldn’t work together unless they’re life depended on it.
Second doctor: Could that be it? Could they think that we are going to destroy all of them?
Forth Doctor: That could be it. (Looks at twelfth doctor) What do you think?
Twelfth doctor: It could- Of course! That’s it!
Second, Forth, Tenth & Eleventh Doctors: What’s it?
Twelfth Doctor: Is the master one of them?
Forth Doctor: Yes. Why?
Twelfth Doctor: 3, 2, 1...
Eleventh Doctor: Oh.
Tenth Doctor: Oooo. Woops. Sorry I didn’t figure that out sooner.
Forth Doctor: Of Course.
Second Doctor: What is it? Why are they working together?
Twelfth Doctor: I can see why you can’t tell, because you don’t know that much about the master yet. But he’s an expert hypnotist.
Second Doctor: Oh.
Twelfth Doctor: So they’re not working together willingly. And most of them aren’t our enemies.
Eleventh Doctor(In worried, quiet voice): Didn’t the first doctor say that he saw the master spying on us?
Tenth Doctor: Yes. He did.
The master walks through the TARDIS doors and claps slowly while smirking*
Master: Well done. But you’re too late. Soon you’ll be out of the way and I’ll be able to take over the universe.
Twelfth Doctor: But if you destroy us, you’ll destroy the universe!
Master: Remember? Expert hypnotist. (Changes to his calm, soothing voice) You aren’t who you think you are. The real twelfth doctor is- Silent.
Boy: Who are you? Where am I?
Master (In his normal voice): A child turned into you. He will be destroyed with you. You are trapped. Your death is near. Evil has risen and you are gathering.
To Be Continued...
Comment Section[]
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Finished Version[]
Doctor Who: The Eternal Death
Episode 1: Evil Rises
By Eamon
- A man of about 20 is sitting on a chair, typing on a computer, wearing a light grey hoodie. A Knock at the door is heard *
Man: It’s Open.
- The door opens and a large shadow appears over the man. The man looks over and smirks.*
Man: I trust everyone is in place?
- The head of the shadow moves up and down as if to nod.*
Man: Excellent.
- The man pulls back his hood, but the scene switches to the shadow before we can see what is underneath. It is revealed that the shadow belongs to no one. After the room turns blue, the shadow starts speaking to the slitheen:
The daleks, cybermen, rogue time lords and humans or the T Group will all prepare a time machine to gather all the doctors together.
The silurians, sea devils, autons, and time axis or the H group will hypnotise the companions so that they all allow themselves to have their necks snapped by the weeping angels or the HII Group.
The Raxicorocafallopatorians, vashta nerada and zygons or the T.II Group will teleport the daleks, cybermen, time lords and humans to safety while everyone else or the E group explode all the doctors to oblivion.
Then we will clone the dead and kill them again. Again. And again. And never stop. The rebirth of the dead, and the death of the Reborn. Forever. Dying every moment but living every moment. The Eternal Life. And The Eternal Death.
- In the Background the voice of a cackling slitheen is heard and the scene switches back to the computer, where it is shown that the T Group are contacting him.*
Opening Credits
- The Scene switches to a dalek ship. Inside there are billions of drones, a strategist, a scientist, two eternals, the supreme, and thousands of humans and humanoid figures.*
The Master (Harold Saxon, Blonde Version): Can I change these plans a bit- What was it?
Slitheen: Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen.
Master: Well, Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen, could I eat some of the companions? I’m Still Hungry.
Hix: I Guess so. Just leave the hair, and we’ll clone them from that.
Master: Dood Blan Krix Chon Koak Heel Blam Kong Quoo Slitheen-
Hix: You Mean ‘Good Plan Hix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen’
Master: No, I mean Dood Blan Kix Cron Poak Keel Slam Dong Do Slitheen.
Hix: Who?
Master: Your Uncle.
Hix: My dad was an only child.
Master: Okay, he’s your great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great uncle, but it’s simpler to call him your uncle. Fair Enough?
Hix: Fair Enough. But he’s dead. He couldn’t survive- How many years?
Master: 1,00,000,0000,00000,000000,0000000,00000000,00000000,0000000000,00000000000 years. And you’re right. But it’s not the original version. We have cloning technology, and he didn’t die of old age. He was assassinated by a time lord, using vinegar. But the slitheen were in charge back then. He was the first Prime Minister of Raxicoricafallopatorius, and his remains were kept in a sacred jar. We got permission to take a drop and cloned him.
Hix: Right. But why did you say that?
Master: He’s a computer expert. I was asking him to get into contact H and H.II. Dood?
- The screen splits into four parts. The top left was the T group, the top right was the H group, the bottom left was T.II the bottom right was H.II. The scene switches to underground.*
Silurian: This is Stilac, Current leader of the Silurians. The H group is ready.
Master: And H.II?
Angel Bob: We escaped from the crack, sir. But the Doctor has part of the time vortex within him, sir. He can sense our presence, as can you, sir. He’ll soon find out, sir. We must prepare soon.
Stilac: We are prepared.
Hix: We are prepared.
Master: We are prepared.
Angel Bob: We are preparing to kill.
Master: What! But you only have to snap necks!
Angel Bob: Not them. NOW!
- Nothing happens.*
Master: Yes, you all had plans to betray us, and I destroyed them by wiping your minds, replacing them with terrible plans, and making sure that you didn’t even use those plans.(Changes to a calm, soothing, mesmerising voice) Now, you will never try and betray us again. You will let me kill you all once you have served your purpose. In 10 seconds, only your sub-conscience will remember this. 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0.
Angel Bob: As I was saying, sir. We are prepared.
Master: Excellent.
Stilac: We have news of the doctors.
Master: Which ones?
Stilac: All of them.
Master: And what of them?
Stilac: See for yourself. Computer, open file D1/12.
- The scene switches to the original version of the TARDIS where the first doctor, Susanne foreman, Ian Chesterson, and Barbara Wright are seen together. The doctor is looking at the screen. *
Doctor: According to this, were being tracked. By creatures from the time of the dinosaurs. But there in 2010 right now. Hang on, that’s me. The eleventh version of me, only enhanced into evil. He’s on a screen, and so are we. Wait, there’s another one, a sixth one. Wait, they know can see them what, wait....... Get out! Get out! NOW! Just walk out, or you’ll die! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No, no, no.......................................... RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s...... No, I’ll survive. I can see me.
- The companions walk out and the doctor follows. They walk out the TARDIS doors close and it disappears. The doctor turns around and sees another TARDIS. He walks in but his companions don’t 1 follow. He sees the second doctor and the second doctor stares in surprise.*
Second Doctor: But... but...but... but what about the first law of time?
First Doctor: It’s an emergency.
Second Doctor: Who is it?
First Doctor: Everyone .Atraxi, Blowfish, Chelonians, Cybermen, Daleks, Draconians, Drahvins, Haegmoth, Hoix, Judoon, Nestene Concsiensous , Autons, Roboforms, Silurians, Slitheen Family, Sontarans, Sycorax, Terileptils, Uvodni, Weevils, Zygons.
Second Doctor: Right. We need more help. I’m setting course for the third doctor. And he’s setting course for the fourth. And he’s setting course for the fifth. And-
First Doctor: Alright, I get the idea. Just Go, and be back in one second. I’ll wait out there for you.
- The first doctor walks out. The TARDIS disappears and appears again one second later. The second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, tenth and eleventh doctors walk out. They are followed by a short, thin, blonde child. They all walk back into the TARDIS.*
Second doctor: Enough?
First Doctor: Yes.
Third Doctor: I disagree. We need companions. Now.
Fourth Doctor: I say Zoe, Jamie, Polly, Ben, The Brigadier, Liz, Jo, Mike, John, Sarah Jane, Harry, Leela, Nyssa, Adric, Tegan, and Romana.
Fifth Doctor: Sixth, Could you go pick them up?
Sixth Doctor: I guess, Celery Boy.
Seventh Doctor: You can Talk, Temper Head.
Eighth Doctor: Oh shut up, (Changes to a Scottish accent), Doctorrr.
Ninth Doctor: Be quiet, Human Lover.
Tenth& Eleventh Doctors: Hey, you lot, stop fighting, were facing everything we have before, and you’re fighting over your own personalities. (Stop talking and look at each other awkwardly) That was weird.
Ninth Doctor: I can’t believe I’m going to turn into that thi-
Boy: Just stop. I may look the youngest of us, but I’m a 915 year old time lord who destroyed his world, brought it back, fought in the real last great time war and lost and died, got resurrected by my previous self, only to see everything and everyone I knew destroyed and my lives taken, so now I’m on my last. If I die, were extinct. Because if I die, the time vortex will have no physical existence and time will tear open. You will all die with me, as will everything. So just go, and do what you need to do. I will come with you, but only to save existence from them. But I’ll tell you one thing: right now, I hold time inside myself. I hold existence. We save ourselves, we save time. We don’t survive, time doesn’t survive. The other rogue time lords can hold it, but they would allow it to be corrupted and destroyed and them with it. So right now, we are existence. If we can defeat them as individuals, we can defeat them working together. (Turns to the Eleventh doctor) Go get every companion. (Turns to the Tenth doctor) Every Ally. (Turns to ninth doctor.) Every Item we could possibly need. (Turns To Eighth doctor.) Every species on our side. (Turns to seventh doctor.) Every Army, Human or alien. (Turns to sixth, then back to seventh.) Actually, no, you go and try to “convince” some more species. (Turns to sixth) You go and get every army, human or alien. (Turns to forth, then to eleventh and tenth) Actually, I’ll replace you two with the third and first. I could use your brains. We’re going to stay and make a plan.
- Scene changes back to the underground Silurian base.*
Stilac: So now we know the current incarnation of the doctor.
Master: So everyone, get ready. We’re at war with the rest of the universe.
Angel Bob: OK.
Stilac: OK.
Hix: OK.
Master: Good. But let’s find out there plan first.
- Scene switches back to the inside of the TARDIS where the second, forth, tenth, eleventh and twelfth doctors are looking at the screen.*
Eleventh Doctor: Thing is, I’ve seen them working together before, and they trapped me in a box, but they were only working together because they thought I was going to destroy the universe. This time, they’re working together just to kill us. Maybe they want us out of the way, and then work together to-
Tenth Doctor: No, they wouldn’t work together unless it was absolutely necessary for survival. They have different aims. Daleks destroy, Cybermen upgrade, Atraxi destroy whatever they think is evil, sontaran fight, and Weevils feed, and so on. They wouldn’t work together unless they’re life depended on it.
Second doctor: Could that be it? Could they think that we are going to destroy all of them?
Forth Doctor: That could be it. (Looks at twelfth doctor) What do you think?
Twelfth doctor: It could- Of course! That’s it!
Second, Forth, Tenth & Eleventh Doctors: What’s it?
Twelfth Doctor: Is the master one of them?
Forth Doctor: Yes. Why?
Twelfth Doctor: 3, 2, 1...
Eleventh Doctor: Oh.
Tenth Doctor: Oooo. Woops. Sorry I didn’t figure that out sooner.
Forth Doctor: Of Course.
Second Doctor: What is it? Why are they working together?
Twelfth Doctor: I can see why you can’t tell, because you don’t know that much about the master yet. But he’s an expert hypnotist.
Second Doctor: Oh.
Twelfth Doctor: So they’re not working together willingly. And most of them aren’t our enemies.
Eleventh Doctor(In worried, quiet voice): Didn’t the first doctor say that he saw the master spying on us?
Tenth Doctor: Yes. He did.
- The master walks through the TARDIS doors and claps slowly while smirking*
Master: Well done. But you’re too late. Soon you’ll be out of the way and I’ll be able to take over the universe.
Twelfth Doctor: But if you destroy us, you’ll destroy the universe!
Master: Remember? Expert hypnotist. (Changes to his calm, soothing voice) You aren’t who you think you are. The real twelfth doctor is- Silent.
Boy: Who are you? Where am I?
Master (In his normal voice): A child turned into you. He will be destroyed with you. You are trapped. Your death is near. Evil has risen and you are gathering.
To Be Continued...